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I want to feel you.

Take me away.

Everything is dark.

Show me where to go.

Take me in your arms.

Let us escape.

Our life is fresh.

An eternity awaits.

Our love is forever.

I need you.

You need me.

Nothing can stop us.

We are one.
I was feeling VERY down when I wrote this poem.
I was playing "Mitadake High" and all of a sudden,
I wanted to write something because I had a feeling
inside of me, and I just needed to write it down, and
this is what I came up with.
I dedicate this poem to someone very special.



You may NOT use, edit, or redistribute my work without permission.

(c) Ashley McDonald 2009.
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Undryable Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2009
A beautiful poem :clap:
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KazukiMuto1 Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2009
Awww a very lovely poem, Ashley.
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Tojolo Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2009   Digital Artist
It's nice :D When that urge comes you just have to obey it and write/draw ;P
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